Oh man Nikki ... is this a great poem! I feel I've now lived the life of a candle or perhaps the poem was speaking of you -bewitching and beguiling. We're left in awe.
This is just just absolutely incredible you erotic little wench you!
I love the part about the "licking at the source of its existence in a dance of need";0)
Figures even your candle's a little slut!
HO! HO! HO!
Damn. This comment really didn't do justice to this gorgeous example of verse and illiteration and metaphor. Forgive me, lil SIC, I'm still high on cough syrup with codeine!
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Oh man Nikki ... is this a great poem! I feel I've now lived the life of a candle or perhaps the poem was speaking of you -bewitching and beguiling. We're left in awe.
Thank you for being you.
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Wow, Nikki, I could see that flame moving with your words :) The music, candle and your "wind" made this a real treat! Awesom my friend!
Love
Fingers stiff, thats "awsome" lol
Beautiful.
Lovely, lovely, lovely ;-) Your alliteration is grand - very lyrical - makes for some elegant verse.
Nikki, this is wonderful. Better than a picture, demands you to close your eyes and see.
V
Nikki,
This is just just absolutely incredible you erotic little wench you!
I love the part about the "licking at the source of its existence in a dance of need";0)
Figures even your candle's a little slut!
HO! HO! HO!
Damn. This comment really didn't do justice to this gorgeous example of verse and illiteration and metaphor. Forgive me, lil SIC, I'm still high on cough syrup with codeine!
XOXOXOX
Your SIC.
ah Huh ah Huh!
That is picture clear and soooo inviting!
Love the candle.
I really like your A-Z also. It is wonderful...
Love TJ
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